The Gift Of Choice
23May 19, 2011 by Employee of the Fukin Month
Choice…
A gift adorned to mortals,
Along with love and hope.
Turned into an unidentifiable scope.
The only option left,
Seems to have created the opposite affect.
Which leads us all onto the road of hate and despair.
An unexpected path, a road that seems quite unfair.
Choice it seems, is what defines us all.
Choose you must before your only option left is thrall.
An advantage though may be given,
It lies within the walls of those who are forgiven.
Should the option not conclude this way,
The emotions you will portray,
Will lead you on a downward spiral.
An endless staircase of corruption, that’s viral.
Choice it seems, is what ultimately binds us all.
What path will you choose to take? Which way will you fall?
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a good choice ..this topic..and the sequence of words properly arranged at their place…
Thanks, i had fun with the words…
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truly elegant. like you are i suppose…viral…spiral…deep!
Thanks Sina – appreciate your compliment. 🙂
Thank u for your comment, I see u understand the struggle the inner battle. Your words song to myself hope, thank u again…
Thank you “mr blaque” – inner battles are something we all share and must overcome!
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keep writing fantastic poetry.
People like to say we have choices but sometimes our choices aren’t really choices at all but paths of doom, not to be dramatic.
Well-written and well-expressed. Thank you for sharing this piece.
~Ms. Queenly
haha, I suppose for someone lacking faith this applies. I don’t necessarily mean the “religious” kind though. From my stand point we choose what path to make – and the choices along the way. What we tend to overlook is that karma plays a role in it all and whether or not we want to accept the responsibility of it all it what makes the difference. Easier said than done though for sure! Thanks for stopping by!
Love your poems and your outlook on life. You might like this.
http://planetcyberluz.com/2011/03/24/freedom/
Thank you, I’ll check out the link – appreciate the suggestion!
I really like this one. The gift of choice indeed.
Thank you! I enjoyed writing it, thanks for stopping by 🙂
how true… our choices make our lives…and if the choices turn out well we are deemed to be smart and intelligent and even lucky 🙂
thnx for sharing.
Couldn’t have said it better myself! appreciate the comment 🙂
“None are more hopelessly enslaved than those who falsely believe they are free.” Goethe
Some very important points you’ve raised! Well-written =)
here here – well said! Thanks for stopping by!
Well expressed, lovely written.
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you – 🙂
I loved the sentiment your poem Choice evokes! You’ve portrayed well the duality of feeling and thought and how choices caught here more often times not are less than happy. Very beautifully written! Cindy
Thank you Cindy – your comments bring a smile to my face! That’s exactly what I was trying to do 🙂